RE: Memories of below(fiction)
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Good one! I love the premise and the way you succinctly lay it out in the first paragraph. It builds nicely from there and kept me engaged. Have to admit the hazmat suits suggested the ending a bit sooner than you might want it to; maybe room for revision there. I also think the urban photographer award is distracting; wouldn't need that detail.
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Thank you, and you are quite right about the hazmat suits. I am def going to think more about how much clues give away in future stories!
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